whoa der..

hmmmm one thing that bothered me was the wheels in the intro on the car didn't turn.. but thats minor.. TEDDY. hmm i have to ask.. were you inspired by wahts his name that did salad fingers? (check out milkman and roof tiling by him too) cuz what i just saw wuz like that.. but not as subtle i guess.. .. but it was frickin cool dude. keep up the good work.

pretty good for a first try

you have the right idea. explore more actionscipt possibilities. im not an expert but i think having more moves would be a lot more fun. AND making the guy fall if he doesnt land right. yea.. its a cool concept.. never woulda thought of it myself.. lol.

nice!

HAHAHA.. that was kewl!!! "no american shows -- outsourcing--" LOL. keep up dee work..

hmmm not bad... uhh

not a bad first time release i guess.. ya need to fix yur preloader.. its screwy.. or my comp is screwy i dont know.... graphics are have very minimal quality im sorry to say.. its good that you have sounds too... hmmm mainly, improve your graphics to be more appealing and add more features and a more user-friendly interface... yah..... ok. not bad tho. like the concept

NICE voice modulation

I would liked to see that modulation brought back somewhere at the middle or the end of the song. I think that was your strongest element and I was expecting that to come back. Also, at the end, the transition to the last portion of the song at 1:55 is kind of weak. The reverse audio is too abrupt to be a good transition i believe.

but yea, i LOVE this voice modulation! i would download a loop of that haha.

Very low fi, but lacking real substance.

It's very nice as a loop, but i would love to see this longer. Right now I feel like theres a good rhythm going with the melody, but a bit of low fi 8bit like drums would be cool like somewhere in the middle to climax it a bit. Or even a light soldier like snare track through the whole thing would make it more chillish. Right now its more like just floating around aimlessly..

i mean its just personal preference, I could see a lot of other uses for this loop just on its own, but yea, a nice drum and a bit more variation in the bass line would be good to add flava. Overall, its a very nice little loop in its lo fi approach =]