kamakaziboy's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[-{[Chill Out]}-]

Very low fi, but lacking real substance.

It's very nice as a loop, but i would love to see this longer. Right now I feel like theres a good rhythm going with the melody, but a bit of low fi 8bit like drums would be cool like somewhere in the middle to climax it a bit. Or even a light soldier like snare track through the whole thing would make it more chillish. Right now its more like just floating around aimlessly..

i mean its just personal preference, I could see a lot of other uses for this loop just on its own, but yea, a nice drum and a bit more variation in the bass line would be good to add flava. Overall, its a very nice little loop in its lo fi approach =]

Pyro-Maniac25892 responds:

Thanks for the review, I'll see if I can take your advice and change it.

[ProtcentA - Much Better]

Really really like the back beat

This is a nice piece fsho. If i were a rapper I would rap this lol. But yea, maybe you could add some more reverb to that piano part, make it punchier. Also, your main organ part, you may want to switch it up a bit, like maybe phase it out somewhere in the song, give the listener a dramatic pause something like that. Even adding a filter on that part would be kinda cool, phase the cutoff etc. You maybe could even change the pitch at certain places, give us some more pleasant surprises in the middle.

So yea, its really an awesome back beat, just a bit more variety and a bit better quality and I would bump this shizzle on my stereo lol

protcentA responds:

thanks 4 the review ;)

[Tickle]

Interesting

Pretty good piece in terms of concept except for a few kinks. what you really need to work on is getting that bass thumpin out there, along with mixing up your layers a little better so they blend.

Aside from that, the piece is kinda disjointed, like the beginning is way too different from the end. Since it is a trance piece, itd be better to try to stick to a main melody line like the beginning had with the happy ticklish noises. You kinda lose it at 1:04 and onward, i mean its okay to deviate a little from the main melody for flavor but you always want to come back to it so the listener isnt lost. But yea the beginning is great =] i really like the theme tickle, hee hee.

Rajiyn responds:

I agree
I used to much different things
And i know just listen my other songs^^

[tF-Rate&Raview]

hmmm nice synth leads

...but yur missing a strong bg beat.. It seems like the entire loop is just an introduction to a song... not an actual song. But props again to the synth leads.

tF-ownedyou responds:

Well umm.. not to be mean,i just wanted to know if this was good so i know what to build on for future songs..

[Journey-Resubmit]

i liked it...

the flow between the elements is really cool i like it.. cept for one of the instruments that come in have a really annoying tone to it and doesnt really fit... i dont know how to describe it, but its one of the first instruments.. other than that its great!

Gorthus responds:

uhm, sure..ok..thanks

[Nuclear Winter Full Version]

niiicceee

nifty little piano thing you got going here.. love it.. i think the best part was when the drums came in for the first time.. i dunno.. . . well, i like it. (the piano seems a bit too muffled to me tho..)

KilgayneAudio responds:

hey thanks for the review ^^ and yeah i think i removed too much resonance for the piano ^^;

["Affected by You" (w/ lyrics)]

yay!

nice! i really liked it. Tell your cuz that she has a really good voice. keep up dat work.

XayberOptix responds:

Kamakaziboy, thanks for the review! I'll be sure to let her know what you said. I'm glad that you enjoyed the tune. Thanks for the encouragement!